Feedforward Sheet 27/02/15 LO2/3/4

OCR Cambridge Technical L3 Media      Unit: 19   

Student Name:    Andrew Quinn                   Class:                  Minimum Target Grade:          Personal Target  Grade for task:

Assignment:  Producing a music video or film trailer

Feed Forward Blog Self-Assessment Coversheet

Areas for improvement for Task 1 to 4 -       Documentary needs changing as the original video was removed, Bubbl.us mind maps can be hard to read, more LO numbers in post titles are needed, needs a few sentences on what the other examples of other audio visual products. No completed and scanned storyboard, no sample of music source, no Recce sheets uploaded. Consent forms needed from actors. 5/11/14 post title needs to state ‘Concept idea’ LO2. -       In the treatment refer to the audience as ABC1 with a disposable income – not ‘ working class’ -       BBFC classification is missing from your treatment in the ‘legal and ethical’ section. Also state which treatment is your ‘contingency plan’. -       Gantt chart does not flow correctly as there are gaps in week 2 and 4. Each activity should automatically follow the next. -       Need completed scripts to be scanned not photographed to the blog. -       For the script, mention in the posts why you kept making adjustments to the old script as this is not clear at the moment. -       You must make sure all details are filled in for call sheets. For example date and who is involved at the top. Upload samples of sound effects and music with copyright information and how you gained person/ copy of the copyright license. You have a lot of rushes of footage that is not usable, so you need to work on filming and uploaded more useable footage for this LO. -       Team roles and responsibilities whilst filming needs to be posted. -       No evidence of you setting up equipment whilst filming. -       More drafts of your trailer with an evaluation of what was done and a critique is needed. -       There are no shot logs, completed edit logs on your blog for the editing so far for your old idea.   -       More evidence of editing is needed. More screen recordings to be used too instead of just screen grabs.

How are you going to address the above issues? Add a new documentary on the blog, export Bubbl.us mind aps as a JPEG, add in the correct LO numbers in the titles, add in the sentences about audio visual products.

What do you still think you need to work on/improve to achieve these?

Feedback sheet 27/02/15 LO2/3/4

OCR Cambridge Technical Level 3 Media    Unit: 46 – Audio visual promos

Student Name: Andrew Quinn                                                              Class:     12x                                                               Minimum Target grade: DM

Assignment: Producing an original music video or film trailer

Blog link: http://alrightandrewunit46.blogspot.co.uk​

Learning Outcome	Work to complete	PIN Feedback
LO1: Understand audio visual promos PASS GRADE (P1)	Analysis of 5 music videos or film trailers similar to the genre that you want to make against the following criteria: Purpose, form, content, meaning, genre, intended audience. Embedded links of your chosen music videos or film trailers that are correctly referenced. Embedded links of 4 other examples of audio visual promos ( vlog, short film, documentary, TV advert)	P -        You have successfully analysed 5 film trailers for this learning outcome with embedded links. I -       Bubbl.us mind maps can be hard to read. Export as a JPEG and upload instead of screen grabs. -       Always add LO number as part of the post title, so it is clear which LO the work is a part of. -       Your example of a documentary (24/10/14) needs replacing as this no longer exists. THIS IS IMPORTANT -       For the examples of other audio promos ( ident/ short film etc) add a couple of sentences to each that explains what it is and what is it promoting. THIS IS IMPORTANT N – See the above improvements P1 ACHIEVED
LO2: Be able to produce pre-production materials for an original audio-visual promo PASS GRADE (P2) MERIT GRADE (M1)	TWO detailed treatments. The second treatment/idea should be posted on your blog as  Contingency Treatment Ofcom regulations (all) and BBFC Classification (film trailers) to be addressed in the treatment. Script using industry standard format Storyboard with camera movement arrows, detailed mise en scene, camerawork, shot types, editing information (P2-M1) Weekly Production schedules that state what you are contributing to the group. Gantt chart including pre-production, production and post-production dates. Recce form and photographs for each filming location Risk assessment for each film location Release and consent form for all actors Detailed call sheet for each time you go filming. Copyright permission for songs/ sound effects	P -        Team roles identified for planning documents. -        Evidence of early script with editing instructions -        Evidence of permission for song to be used in the trailer. -        Evidence of risk assessments for different filming locations. -        Call sheets uploaded -        Regular detailed production schedules uploaded. I -       As mentioned above ALL post titles should have the LO number to go with it too. THIS IS IMPORTANT -       You have not uploaded a storyboard, for either your old or new idea. THIS MUST BE COMPLETED AND SCANNED IN ASAP -       No sample of the music you sourced -       No Recce sheets uploaded. THIS IS IMPORTANT – UPLOAD  THEM WITH THE LOCATION SHOTS YOU HAVE TAKEN -       You have email evidence of gaining consent from actors but CONSENT FORMS MUST BE UPLOADED FROM ALL YOUR ACTORS THAT YOU USED. THIS IS IMPORTANT. -       5/11/14 post title needs to state ‘Concept idea’ LO2. -       In the treatment refer to the audience as ABC1 with a disposable income – not ‘ working class’ -       BBFC classification is missing from your treatment in the ‘legal and ethical’ section. Also state which treatment is your ‘contingency plan’. -       Gantt chart does not flow correctly as there are gaps in week 2 and 4. Each activity should automatically follow the next. -       Need completed scripts to be scanned not photographed to the blog. THIS IS IMPORTANT -       For the script, mention in the posts why you kept making adjustments to the old script as this is not clear at the moment. -       You must make sure all details are filled in for call sheets. For example date and who is involved at the top. THIS IS IMPORTANT -       Upload samples of sound effects and music with copyright information and how you gained person/ copy of the copyright license. THIS IS IMPORTANT N – See the above improvements PASS - P2 – ALMOST ACHIEVED – MISSING STORYBOARD/AND PLANNING DOCUMENTS MISSING M1 – NOT YET ACHIEVED DUE TO MISSING STORYBOARD
LO3: Be able to produce materials for use in an original audio-visual promo PASS GRADE (P3) MERIT GRADE (M2) DISTINCTION GRADE (D1)	Photographic evidence of setting up equipment, using and following script/storyboard, recce forms and risk assessment when filming (photographs, vine videos) Team roles/responsibility whilst filming to be evidenced on your blog. Footage from filming to be uploaded to your blog under blog post title Rushes. This must be evaluated against:  what is useable and why, what needs to be re-filmed.	P -       Rushes have been uploaded and most of them have been evaluated on the blog. -       Drafts of your trailer have been uploaded I -       You have a lot of rushes of footage that is not usable, so you need to work on filming and uploaded more useable footage for this LO. THIS IS IMPORTANT -       Team roles and responsibilities whilst filming needs to be posted. -       No evidence of you setting up equipment whilst filming. -       More drafts of your trailer with an evaluation of what was done and a critique is needed. THIS IS IMPORTANT N – See above improvements PASS - P3, M2, D1 NOT YET ACHEIVED
LO4: Be able to edit production materials to produce an original audio-visual promo PASS GRADE (P4) MERIT GRADE (M3) DISTINCTION GRADE (D2)	Completed shot logs for all footage to be uploaded. Completed Edit log to be uploaded Evidence of adding visual and audio effects to footage (Photographs/ videos) Evidence of what each member of the group has contributed in the editing stages (screen grabs/vine videos) Final audio visual promo to be uploaded.	P -       Screen grab of editing in Premiere and Audition. -       Sample of an edit log. -       There are no shot logs, completed edit logs on your blog for the editing so far for your old idea.  THIS IS IMPORTANT -       More evidence of editing is needed. More screen recordings to be used too instead of just screen grabs. THIS IS IMPORTANT   N -       See above comments PASS - P4, M3, D2 – NOT YET ACHIEVED

Literacy/ Numeracy/Oracy Assessment on your Unit blog.

N/A

PROVISIONAL GRADE FOR UNIT 46:  - pass This is due to a large amount of paperwork missing/incomplete from your blog for LO2 - LO4, (even from your old idea) and an incomplete production.

MTG ACHIEVED?: NO

Corruption Phase Script - LO2

Corruption Phase

By

Andrew Quinn, James Hartshorn, Joe Taylor

And Kenneth Abrina

1. EXT. PARK. DAY.

Scenes of CLAIRE and DANIEL walking in a park on a sunny day.

(CLAIRE IS LAUGHING WITH DANIEL)

FADE TO

A slow motion scene of CLAIRE and DANIEL walking holding hands.

Close-up of CLAIRE and DANIEL holding hands.

CUT TO

Shot reverse shot of CLAIRE and DANIEL talking to each other sat on the floor in the park.

(CLAIRE IS LAUGHING WITH DANIEL)

CUT TO

CLAIRE leans her head on DANIEL’S shoulder.

Over the shoulder shot of CLAIRE and DANIEL sat looking at the sky.

FADE TO

DANIEL and CLAIRE are at home. There is a knock on the door. DANIEL opens the door.

CUT TO

Flashes of CLAIRE in a chair with a bag on her head, screaming.

TITLE: The Chainsaw Bakery

CUT TO

CLAIRE in a chair with a bag on her head, screaming.

20 seconds

RED takes the bag off CLAIRES head.

RED

Shut up!

(RED PUNCHES CLAIRE IN THE FACE)

Focus pull to Blue in the background on his phone

(BLUE calls a number on his phone)

CUT TO

DANIEL wakes up, in the woods, to the sound of his phone.

CUT TO

BLUE

Your gonna have to do something for a certain someone.

CUT TO

DANIEL’S reaction to hearing CLAIRE scream through the phone.

15seconds

CUT TO BLACK

CUT TO

BLUE

Have a nice week

CUT TO

DANIEL running on a street.

DANIEL opening an envelope with a CD titled NUKE

DANIEL speaking with police officer

DANIEL

I have no clue about where she is or anything

CROSS CUT

RED and BLUE nodding/ WATCHING CCTV (EYELINE MATCH)

Clip of him file nuking the computers in his office

DANIEL

A file nuke seriously? You hold my fucking girlfriend hostage to get me to do that?

BLUE

It won’t end there

DANIEL gun pointed to random guy on floor

DANIEL

I really didn’t want to end up doing this

DANIEL shoots then instantly cuts to

DANIEL

What do you mean?

20-5seconds

CUT TO

News report:

Murder suspect Daniel Reynolds missing

DANIEL looking at his hands shaking.

RED with a knife to CLAIRE’S neck

RED

You have five seconds Daniel!

CUT TO

DANIEL swinging crowbar in room with flashes of red

with flashes to CLAIRE and DANIEL before kidnapping.

CUT TO

TITLE GRAPHIC

Coming this Autumn

DANIEL and BLUE in a dark room, BLUE with a gun pointed to DANIEL.

DANIEL

But why are you targeting us?

BLUE

You don’t remember a thing do you?

20-25seconds

DANIEL on the phone to the police

DANIEL

I’m going to kill many, many people, so get someone to come down and stop me.

DANIEL picks up a rucksack and puts it on his back and walks to a building.

TITLE GRAPHIC

Corruption Phase

4seconds

Trailers we looked at for inspiration LO2

The Longest Ride


Kidnapped


In Static


Dead Man's Shoes

Plot for Corruption Phase - LO2

This is the plot for Corruption Phase

• Innocent guy with girl, happy, scenes of them shopping, walking across a river etc
• Knock on door, opens it, black
• Wakes up in the middle of the woods with a note with a phone number on it
• Calls it
• Guy on phone says "We want you to do things for a certain someone" then the protagonist hears screams of his girlfriend.
• Cuts to him running through the woods
• Chainsaw Bakery Present

Tutor Feedback - LO2/3/4

Minimum Target Grade: DM

Current Grade: Pass

We need to:

• Focus more on the comedic aspects of the trailer
• More evidence and paperwork on blog
• Logging is the edit list and evaluation
• Make it of a standard quality
• Quick jokes because a trailer lacks context
• Need more basic editing techniques
• Execute the montage more
• Locations need work.